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avatar From  kera4147 - Jun 12, 2015
I liked your drawing on the front page!

avatar From  jenlevering - Dec 26, 2014
Annnddddd advance the plot

avatar From  jenlevering - Dec 15, 2014
Great lesson

avatar From  marshmellowbelly - Dec 2, 2014
I thought it was good but I also agree with Kelly oh and next time advance the plot

avatar From  Kelly - Jun 3, 2014
I hope you read your next story out loud and record it so I can hear what you sound like